Ashfaaq-e-mohabbat ….

Wo kehte rahe saccha Ishq zindagi mein ek baar hota hai,
Humne kaha, kahaan…
Aaj kal har kisi ko har doosre din hota hai ….

Wo kehte rahe Ishq ki na shakl, na awaaz aur na zubaan hoti hai,
Humne kaha, kahaan…
Paisa bolta hai , dikhawa bikhta aur izzat sare aam uchalti hai…

Wo kehte rahe Ishq zaat, dharm aur qaum se pare hota hai,
Humne kaha , kahaan…
Kal hi toh us masoom ko sare aam jaati ke naam par jalaya tha,
Kya aise pyar izhaar hota hai…

Kahan pyar ki bhasha aur ishq ki boli sunta hai insaan,
K kaash apno se bada apne ko na samjhe insaan .

Jise samajhne ki iltaja sirf kar sakay thay, Mir, Ghalib aur faraz ,
Usay un hare rang ke kagazo se khareedta hai insaan.

Na hum thay jab,
Na nishaan tumhara tha ,
Khuda ne tab yeh Mohabbat banayi thi,
Farishto ne insaniyat ki neev sajayi thi….

Badlega insaan,
Badal jayein yeh hawa, mitti ya imaan,
Wo kehte rahe Ishq tab bhi tha,
Wo keh rahe hain Ishq kal bhi rahega ….

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4 comments

  1. sameer · October 26, 2011

    Honestly.. Its a very good poem.. The meaning is good.. Thought is excellent.. Transformation into words is decent.. Only one thing I wud like to say is u gotta increase ur vocab of urdu.. Richer words would bring zaika in this already awsome recipe πŸ˜‰ all in all just wonderful.. (Y)

    • honeyak · October 27, 2011

      Thanks Sam πŸ™‚ actually urdu is sumthn Im always improving… but this poem is more of in Hindi than urdu..thats what my thought process was, when I was writing . Ill keep ur feedback in mind πŸ™‚

  2. Ram · October 29, 2011

    contemporary, poetic-gestures backed with sufficient literature.. entertaining and easy to connect, lovely metaphors πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ (i read it thrice.. and adored it every time)

    • honeyak · October 30, 2011

      Thank you ram πŸ™‚ It’s always a pleasure receiving feedback from your end. The points that you earlier mentioned to me..will be up from the next post πŸ™‚

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